TOEIC Writing 연습4

문제8

지문
===> "새로운 신체적 기술을 배우는 것은 정신적 기술을 배우는 것보다 쉽다"라는 말에 동의 하는가? 구체적인 이유와 예를 들어 답변하시오(300단어 이상)

답변
===> I disagree with the statement. I think learning a new metal skill is easier than learning a new physical skill.
There are three reasons for that.
First, learning a new metal skill is safety. For example, you study about fight. In physical learning, you must fight with someone. It means you could wound by expositor. Even though, you might be lost your life. But metal fight does not make your body painful. Because all fights are occur in your brain. It means you don’t worry about your life. You just need strong concentrate.
Second, learning a new mental skill is save time. For example, you learn about soccer game. In physical learning view, you need many practices to know soccer rules and take a game. If game was end, you need take a break to next game. But if you practice soccer game in your brain, you can save time. Because of it is not affected by your body condition. Also speed of brain’s thinking is faster than body’s action. Fast learning speed can save your time.
Third, learning a new metal skill is save money. For example, you want to know golf. If you want to physical learning, you need go to golf academy. Also you need golf equipments. Also you need practice in golf field. It’s very expensive, especially in Korea. I think you need more than 10million won. If you are not rich, it’s very difficult for you. But metal skills are needs just few bucks. For example, you want to know about Baduk. It’s very common mental skill. You just need Baduk stones and a board. It’s very cheap. I think you need less than 100 thousands won. Also do not need additional cost. You are just training the game by your brain.
For these reasons, I insist that learning a new metal skill is easier than learning a new mental skill.