TOEIC Writing 연습1

문제
==>배움의 방법에는 행동, 읽기, 시청각이 있는데 개인적으로 어떤 방법이 가장 좋은지 예를 들어 설명하시오 (300단어 이상)


답변
===> I think learn by reading is best method.
First, learning by doing is inefficiency. For example, you study about an animal. First you search the animal. May be it liven in sea or jungle. Then you must go to there. It needs a lot of money. Also it takes a long time. If you can any dangerous animal like lion or tiger, your life would be end. There is also other example. You want study MMA. Then you just reply professional fighter’s movement. But your muscle is not trained as well as the fighters. It makes your body hurt. After wounded, your study will be need more times. Also need a lot of money to healing your body.
Second, learning by listening to lecture or watching demonstrations is very boring and not creative. For example, most of Korean high school and middle school use that method in lecture. It can save time and teaching lot of contents. But student do not need think about lecture. Then they do not critic about knowledge. There is no invents, if there is no questions. Most of innovation items and invents from creative. Korean students are just memory machine. They can not make something new. Then it makes more weaken nation in the future. And some student sleep in lecture because it’s very bored to there is no questions to student by teacher. In other words, it is difficult to concentrate on class, therefore score will be lower.
Finally, learning by reading is very efficiency. Most of knowledge and science are based on text. To learning, we need read it. And it is also save time. Because of reading speed is individual ability. Then they no wait for others like other methods. Then we can repeat it many times in same time of other methods. Therefore learning efficiency will be higher.
In these reasons, I insist that learn by reading is best.